Hi, my name is Lily lovebraids. I get up at seven eleven in the morning. I have breakfast at seven twenty with my mom and brother. I have meat, but my brother doesn't like them. He has fruit. We go to school at 7:45. We have lunch at 12:15. I have noodles. I go home at 4:30. We have dinner together at six o'clock. I go to bed at nine o'clock.

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Hi, my name is Lily lovebraids. I get up at seven eleven in the morning. I have breakfast at seven twenty with my mom and brother. I have meat, but my brother doesn't like them. He has fruit. We go to school at 7:45. We have lunch at 12:15. I have noodles. I go home at 4:30. We have dinner together at six o'clock. I go to bed at nine o'clock.

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Your paragraph is understandable, but it needs a few grammar and word corrections. Here is the corrected version:

Hi, my name is Lily Lovebraids. I get up at 7:11 in the morning. I have breakfast at 7:20 with my mom and brother. I have meat, but my brother doesn't like it. He has fruit. We go to school at 7:45. We have lunch at 12:15. I have noodles. I go home at 4:30. We have dinner together at 6:00. I go to bed at 9:00.

If you want, I can also:

simplify it for speaking practice, or
turn it into a short daily routine paragraph for school.

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